Thursday 11 March 2010

comments on rought cut....

Editing:
- A flick between shots while driving
- Blatent Suts
- Camera darkened
- TOO LONG
- when in the car when the light shine brightly its effective
- Shots didn't link too smoothly together
- each shot should be shorter makes the cuts less effective

Camera Work:
- Varied camera shots, to show different views, over the shoulder, point of view
- shot lengths in car too long

Sound:
- Stays in sync with the thriller genre, doesnt change though
- promiscuity needed
Sound of skateboard
- Sound at beginning very effective
-no sound at teh beginning good use of tension but a bit long

Mise en Scen
-lighting - dark
Location flicked between a park and driving on a road
costume, not much

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